“Success” is undeniably one of the most powerful, influencial word ever. Every single person on Earth has the ability to gain their own success, but they don’t, they are afraid of challenges. I take mu own stance that good luck constitues just a little part in your success, which has mostly been built with your preseverance.
First and foremost, habits are the symbol of preseverance. Day by day, trying to improve yourself by replacing another better habit with the bad one. Furthermore, usually-appeared thoughts build your characters and guarantee your future. Always think positively as “you are what you think”!
Secondly saying, preseverance is often believed to be restricted by constant failures. Notwithstanding, that failures come to you means you are going in the right way, the wat to success. Moreover, contemporary failures can prevent normal people from keeping going, but to successful people, it is another closer step to their success!
Last but not least, your desire to be successful also plays a crucial role in guaranteeing your next vivid days. No matter how hard it may be, how long it may take, you have to be faithful with your desire! No surrenduring, keep going and your hard work will be paid off. Therefore, an unique plentiful gold mine will fall on your head just like leaves on a tree.
To put things in a nutshell, you are what you constantly think of! Be smart, make use of your preseverance and achive success. It’s gonna be hard, but hard is not impossible!
- Some people believe that the government should ban dangerous sporting activities, while others think that people should have the freedom to do whatever sports they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- These days children spend more time on doing homework or participating in school-related activities or sports. However, they should be given more time to do whatever they want. 70
- Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international lang 67
- Is it good for children to start using computers from an early ageand spend long hours on them? Discuss the advantages anddisadvantages. 89
- Nowadays more and more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face Is this a positive or negative development 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 284, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... hard work will be paid off. Therefore, an unique plentiful gold mine will fall on...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05928853755 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03269482283 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660079051383 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4692076506 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4615384615 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183941090232 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638165093659 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724382952036 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987186924775 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528425158792 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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