You travelled by plane last week and your luggage was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.Write to the airline explaining what happened. Describe your luggage and tell them what was in it. Find out what are they going to do about i

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You travelled by plane last week and your luggage was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.
Write to the airline explaining what happened. Describe your luggage and tell them what was in it. Find out what are they going to do about it.
You should write at least 150 words.
Begin your letter as dear sir/madam.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in order to request you to enquire about the bag that I had forgotten during my flight from London to Waterloo.

My name is Peter Smith and I am a frequent client of your airline service from several years. To commence with, my flight number was 12345 and seat number was 123. It was a domestic flight and I was traveling by business class. Besides this, the reporting time was 9:00 am.

Unfortunately I left my bag on my seat because I was getting late for the meeting which is the main reason behind my visit. The color of my bag is red. It contains valuable documents, my personal credentials, a small amount of cash and some worthy accounting details regarding my company.

The documents of contract with client are mandatory which are expected not to reveal as I was given the responsibility of that. Please let me know about the bag as soon as possible. I would be extremely thankful to you.

I look forward for your prompt response.

Yours faithfully,
Peter Smith.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in order to req...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67955801105 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60579101635 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646408839779 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1747561839 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1538461538 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152126372503 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586996105525 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362954485193 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794855268176 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465554901127 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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