It is true that every individual has different interests and various sorts of enjoyable moments in the life. While some folks believe that teenage is the most jovial phase of the life, but others feel that having a different roles and responsibilities gives them a more pleasant feeling.
On the one hand, there is a lot of fun in the teen's life. Firstly, juveniles have lot of friends of the same peer group with whom they can share their feelings and ideas which helps them to feel more comfortable and emotionally strong. For instance, a group of teens can hang out to a restaurants, beaches, cinemas or birthday parties where they can enjoy among themselves. Secondly, most of the teenagers depend on their parents for their expenses, and they don't have to bother about earnings at that moment which makes their life stress free and more enjoyable.
On the other hand, adults have more fascinating time in the life. Personally, adults have their own family commitments and responsibilities. For example, parents have to teach the kids about the life from their real life experiences, and give love and emotional support to the children. In professional terms, most of the individuals spent most of their time at the workplace, and therefore, they want to express their knowledge and skills in an organization. Also, the promotions, perks and incentives, learning new professional skills and earning more money makes them even more happy. With the money, they can buy houses, car and other luxury items which enables them to lead a happy and comfortable life.
In conclusion, adult life has its own enjoyable moments, but I personally feel that teenage phase of life has more fun and joy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teens'' or 'teen's'?
Suggestion: teens'; teen's
... one hand, there is a lot of fun in the teens life. Firstly, juveniles have lot of f...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a restaurant' or simply 'restaurants'?
Suggestion: a restaurant; restaurants
...tance, a group of teens can hang out to a restaurants, beaches, cinemas or birthday parties w...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ir parents for their expenses, and they dont have to bother about earnings at that m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96842105263 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72959905261 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.343760849 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168948484563 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751790662733 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576806914298 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124790524916 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425901534783 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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