Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. Your opinion? Good or bad.
Recent days, there has been colossal upsurge in the trends to see prodigies discussing the latest trends of large shopping malls replacing small shops. While many progressively believe that shopping malls will completely overtake the small shops, others completely despise it. This essay will prudently persuade why shopping malls are taking the place of traditional shops.
To commence with, shopping malls provide good combination of convenience and comfort. More specifically, these malls are air-conditioned and almost everything, starting from grocerry to clothes, cars, furniture etcetera, can be found at one place. All these advantages have piqued the shoppers to troop to these malls. Seen in this light, it is obvious that these malls are getting incresingly popular these days.
Another insight that must not be neglecte, meanwhile, is the abundance of variety and options that they provide. For example, in these shopping centers, not only we can purchase clothes and electronic appliances of local companies, but also the international brands. Moreover, many sources of entertainment are also available including movie halls and play area for kids. Thus, consistent with this line of thinking, it is not strange that these malls will gradually replace old shops.
In conclusion, all the above mentioned evidences are enough to conclude that eventually these traditional shops will vanish and will become an history.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ional shops will vanish and will become an history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59633027523 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78769284137 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655963302752 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8641453864 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260548399045 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940724782547 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910589234078 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143241637555 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115427739015 0.0609392437508 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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