Some people think that Parent's can educate children at home instead of school?
It is irrefutable to say that education plays a significant role in a child's overall development. These days a new trend in the society has emerged to educate their children at home rather than sending to schools. However, I have a contrary opinion about this change and I would like to explicate it at length in following paragraphs.
Firstly, it is a competitive world and we need the best teachers for our children. Schools primary function is education, so they keep themselves up to date with the latest changes across the world in the education area and design their curriculum to prepare children to compete globally.
Furthermore, other than academics, children also learn the social etiquette which is equally important as education. Schools also indulge children in various group activities like Dance, Sports etc which is required for a child overall growth.
Last but not the least is learning to live in a discipline environment, in schools children follow a strict routine where stringent timings are followed for all activities like reporting to school, completing the homework. Living in a disciplined environment boosts their self-confidence which helps them to combat to unforeseen situations.
In conclusion, there are numerous learning that a student learns from school and in order to succeed in the market, a proper foundation needs to be establish since from the beginning. Education is a necessity of an individual for his all-round development where schools plays a crucial role in this learning, hence going to school is imperative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.276 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99392718682 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4600605097 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.909090909 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192032967968 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693329189978 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454934707797 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101219642244 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305515026389 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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