The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents better parenting skills. To what extend do you agree?
It is a fact that youth crime rates are increasing day by day in our society while providing their parents with parenting technique would be useful to overcome this problem. I strongly disagree that teaching parents how to raise their children is not an effective way to deal with the issue of young criminals.
On the one hand, parent’s hand on their filiation is very pivotal for their personal growth as if parents would give better guidance and seek moral values, their children would be keep away from bad things. A child is always try to imitate many good qualities from its parents. Moreover, guidance for illegal activities should be teach to every youngster to understand the consequence of the problem. For example, when individuals are aware of harsh punishments after committing any crime, they will have to think twice before indulging into the trouble.
On the other hand, the school plays a significant role in the building block of bright future of an individual because folks spend most of their time in institutions to achieve quality education. It is the duty of every teacher to get familiar and give detail knowledge about the crimes and train them in a proper way to become good people and serve their country at an international level. Furthermore, the Government has also contribute their active role to reduce the crime rates. They can improve the security by keeping CCTV cameras placed at every corner of the street. If these measures will take seriously, not only youngster but others would reluctant to commit any crime.
To recapitulate, I believe that educate the parents by parenting skills is not an ideal solution to minimize this over-whelming matter. However, it is a duty if everyone to play a tremendous part in the effort of preventing youth crimes because these young adults are the pride of our country.
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| 2018-10-10 | Kapil Kumar | 84 | view |
| 2018-10-10 | Kapil Kumar | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97106109325 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67165617451 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614147909968 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7350444444 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256384498092 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799608264473 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704356552506 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15774564336 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475402222982 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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