Saving is better than spending. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that they should save money than spend it. In my opinion of view, I do not agree with this notion, since I supposed that both saving and spending have equal values.
From the first perspective, spending is inevitable, since we live in the present society where we have to pay a lot of daily costs such as foods, clothes... Furthermore, when we spend money, we also increase the economy by creating more jobs and currently solve one of the most serious dilemmas in the world - unemployed issues. Moreover, we only have one life to live and if spending money can make your life happier and give you a chance to enjoy your life. So it is worth.
On the other hand, we live in a world full of turmoil. Anything can happen, such as getting fired, having a disease or relating financial crisis. For example, a research carried out by Queen University has shown that 80% of jobs will be replaced because of the development of A.I ( artificial intelligence ) in 2030. This mean, anyone can lose their job and become unemployed in the near future. In those urgent circumstances, the saving money will help us a lot.
In conclusion, although we should save money for the rainy days, we also should spend money on something as a gift for our efforts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63392857143 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51346595583 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647321428571 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9382560059 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0920296782773 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348289731907 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521038995217 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694207687367 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757559894555 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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