Some people think that school should reward student to show the best academic result. Why others believe that it is more important to reward student who shows improvement. Discuss both view and give your opinion
One of the most debatable issue today relates to that school ought to give rewards to just only who better performance in academic exams rather than but, others individual feels that it's better way if teachers give prize to student during class test results. In this essay, I am going to examine this questions from both point of view.
On the one hand, there are number of reasons that school also distribute the prize for topper students in class. The main reason for believing this is that in modern era school also organize the competition with more encourage to learner that they also participate and show of the own best performance during competition with gain to the prize with which they reduce to the inequality among students. For instance, there are number of competition organizer by school member like football, cricket, quiz, dance and so on. Thus, students also prepare the competition in practice ground with to do more hard work and more than skills and ability improve with become behaviour more confidential.
However, if school only give rewards during annual exam then students before test never doing study without any doubt. People have often this opinion that small achievement also appreciate and encourage to student with which others learner more motivate participate in competition and win to the prize. Additionally, students also complete the homework and learn to test with which slightly they earn to big name, fame, and respect in school. They also share the own class result with friends and relatives thereby, they also feel jealous and encourage to earn honor and success in life.
In conclude, I pen down to say that there is no doubt upcoming years student more addicts in rewards with might be they without prize never efforts and prepare class test and annual exam. Therefore, it's compulsory for school give rewards to student only some especially competition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44348362894 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536507936508 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3179328491 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250609159728 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986787987173 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056380313131 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163210902014 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285165247743 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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