Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s
development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
One point of view held by some people is to educate children at home, another view held by majority of people is to send children to school to get education. Both the view points have their own advantages.
Children who are educated at home feel more connected to their parents and siblings. They spend most of the time at home and thus have a great attachment to the members of their family. Also, they feel protected physically and exposure to communicable diseases is limited to a larger extent. Last but not the least, the traditions and culture are not polluted and parents can nuture their children with their own beliefs.
On the other hand, children who goto school are more socially prepared as they meet and communicate with different types of students with diverse cultural backgrounds and beliefs. Another benefit is that children's immune system gets challenged everyday and it keeps on evolving and thus leads to stronger immunity to diseases. Lastly, schooling provides an arena to children to make new friends which boosts their confidence and provides a wider range of learning experience.
To conclude, the advantages of sending children to school outweigh the advantages in getting them educated at home. Children need to be prepared for the future due to globalisation and competition and this cannot be achieved by getting education at home. Children should be encouraged to co-exist with diversified group of people, racially and intellectually, to nuture themselves for a brighter future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...childrens immune system gets challenged everyday and it keeps on evolving and thus leads...
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Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
... and provides a wider range of learning experience. To conclude, the advantages of send...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, so, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17886178862 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77608647037 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577235772358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7762690479 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236722692872 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876036113835 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539206906344 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143690209618 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547126006483 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.