LIVING IN A COUNTRY WHERE YOU HAVE TO SPEAK A FOREIGN LANGUAGE CAN CAUSE SERIOUS SOCIAL PROBLEMS , AS WELL AS PRACTICAL PROBLEMS.TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

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LIVING IN A COUNTRY WHERE YOU HAVE TO SPEAK A FOREIGN LANGUAGE CAN CAUSE SERIOUS SOCIAL PROBLEMS , AS WELL AS PRACTICAL PROBLEMS.
TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

Submitted by planet695 on Thu, 10/25/2018 - 00:56

IT IS CLEAR THAT LIVING IN A FOREIGN COUNTRY HAS ITS OWN BENEFITS AND DRAWBACKS TO CONSIDER. I AGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT, HOWEVER I THINK THAT ANYBODY COMING IN ANOTHER COUNTRY SHOULD RESPECT NATIONAL CULTURE. IN THIS ESSAY, I WOULD LIKE TO OUTLINE THE SOCIAL AND PRACTICAL PROBLEMS.
THE SOCIAL PROBLEMS WOULD BE LANGUAGE BARRIER, WHICH MEANS THAT A PERSON COMING FROM ANOTHER COUNTRY MIGHT NOT BE ABLE TO SPEAK AND UNDERSTAND THE LANGUAGE WHICH MIGHT BE A PROBLEM AS FAR A PERSON WHO IS LIVING IN A COUNTRY, AND A PERSON WHO CAME IN THE COUNTRY. ANOTHER PROBLEM IS LINKED TO THE LANGUAGE BARRIER, BUT IT MIGHT INFLUENCE THE BEHAVIOR OF OTHERS. AN INDIVIDUAL WHO COME INTO THE FOREIGN COUNTRY MIGHT OFFEND OTHERS WITH THEIR BEHAVIOR OR LANGUAGE. FOR EXAMPLE; SOME CULTURES LIKE ENGLISH PEOPLE PREFER TO BE VERY POLITE AND SAY THINGS DIFFERENTLY FROM OTHER CULTURES. THEREFORE, A PERSON WHO DOES NOT KNOW HOW TO BEHAVE IN A PARTICULAR CULTURE MIGHT OFFEND OTHERS AROUND HIM.
THE PRACTICAL PROBLEMS WOULD BE MISUNDERSTANDING OF CULTURE. THAT MEANS THAT A PERSON WHO VISITS OTHER COUNTRIES DOES NOT UNDERSTAND OTHER CULTURE AND BEHAVES AS HE WANTS TO.
THE SECOND PRACTICAL PROBLEM IS FINDING A JOB. AN INDIVIDUAL WHO WORKS IN FOREIGN COUNTRY MIGHT NOT BE APPROPRIATE FOR PEOPLE WHO HE SERVES. FOR EXAMPLE IF AN INDIVIDUAL WORKS IN A RESTAURANT, THE PEOPLE WHO LIVE IN A COUNTRY AND THEY WERE BORN IN THAT COUNTRY MIGHT NOT RESPECT AND NOT LIKE THE BEHAVIOR OF A PERSON WHO WORKS IN A RESTAURANT, IT MIGHT BE BECAUSE, THE CULTURES ARE DIFFERENT.
TO SUMMARIZE, IT CAN BE SAID THAT THERE ARE A LOT OF MISCONCEPTIONS WHICH PEOPLE HAVE WHEN THEY COME IN A FOREIGN COUNTRY, AND IN MY OPINION AND FROM MY PERSONAL EXPERIENCE PEOPLE SHOULD EDUCATE THEMSELVES IN ORDER TO KNOW HOW TO BEHAVE IN DIFFERENT SITUATIONS WITH DIFFERENT CULTURES.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82857142857 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68788984645 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434920634921 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.2723889147 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.642857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176756300826 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773662783892 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457201669277 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115706564858 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649103130343 0.056905535591 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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