Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There is an argue that environmental issues can be solved on worldwide range. On the other hand, some thinks it is better to handle them nationally. In my opinion, solving problems in which scale is depends on how complicated is the issue.
On the one hand, it is vital that enormous environmental issues such as global warming, are treadted internationally.
In the last centuries, humans invented remarkable new technologies such as airplanes,automobiles and telephone communications , and developed for their benefits but it has followed by significant drawbacks in the world we living.For instance, global warming has led to arctic sea decline, sea level rise and extreme weather.The governments , international organisations and scientific associations are seeking for solutions for reducing green house gas emissions and prove a climate resilent future for the next generations. However, the influence of individuals over environment should not be ignored. It can be considered as minor but it is a contribution for better environment in the future.
On the other hand, there is problems which can be handled on a national scale.For example , the air pollution, burning fossils such as coal and gases to create or power our cars ,releases great amount of CO2 in atmosphere. Emissions of CO2 dramatically increased in the last 5 decades and it is extremely harmful for human health. One posible solution to decrease the amount of CO2 is that supporting renewable energy sources wind , solar and hydropower and decommission burning fossil appliance.
In conclude, environmental problems should be handled by both locals and international authorities as well as individuals.Every single person should take care of environment where they living and spread the knowledge for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49454545455 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41417745589 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614545454545 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.962413908 49.4020404114 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.363636364 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203247805934 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924160859047 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807302952812 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127652062018 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107022073944 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.