Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Public health has been always one of the sophisticated issues in each society and over last several years, there have been lots of efforts done by establishments to improve public health in some countries. In the same context, some people advice former to construct more number of sports facilities so that people can exercise there under guidance, however others disgrace this and believe that this will be waste of resources and other measures should be taken. Both the views are scrutinised holistically, before reforming any opinion.
Admittedly, availability of sports centres can make a situation that anyone can do exercise without considering others factors such as travelling, guidance etcetera. In the developing countries, health problem is getting worsen day by day because of un-availability of the options as they have to travel to particular area for exercise. On the many instances, membership prices of sports centres are so high that middle class person are unable to afford them for the longer period. To substantiate it, According to various surveys, it has been found that 70% of gym members do not continue because of high subscription fees. In such conditions, constructing sports facilities will ease the situation.
However, sports centres are not a sole solution as after sometime, people lack the motivation and they start taking breaks and eventually, end by giving up on the former. People lack encouragement and this can be done by the public awareness. For instance, Ireland started marathon to aware about obesity related problems and after the end of marathon week, memberships in the sports facilities increased by 45% and authorities are holding such events at regular intervals so that it's citizens continue with the subscriptions.
Having dwelled on such thoughts, it is clear that other steps such as races, gaming events are required to keep the spirit of people to continue doing their exercises and hence, governments should spend more revenue on the latter instead of constructing game centres.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, so, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31481481481 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86259400622 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8866466033 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21919880141 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700633833591 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067186528429 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125151401757 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895120637012 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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