It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.
Some of people think children has great oppurtinity if they are choosing same jobs with their parents.Becuase they defens to it is great for getting knowledge about a job.Others think that children are not choosing same job with thier parents. According to them children never have great think with a job. In my opinion children can choose parents' job beacuse they had already known very valueable specialities about any jobs. In the other words I agree with following statement and I am going to explain why I agree with in several reasons.
Children the most important things for their parents in the world.In this reason parents always want to thier children to be perfect.Under the this definition if a child had decided to do same job with parents,it would beneficial to him or her.Beacuse a child do not have to search any job when he or she will been graduated form a high school or an university. In other words, children are be able to find job directly when they will graduated form any level of education. For example, when I was a student at high school I had many friends one of my friends had worked with their father in a small company instead of they finished high school.This company was related with cars and my friends had great experiences about cars and thier engines. He had been learning great things about car even he only worked with his father.In this reason even a child did not graduate from university he or she has a chance find a job if they are choose same jobs with their parents.
Other reasons why I consider that children should choose same jobs with parents is given great knowledge about market. In other explaination For instance, I remember to when I was a student at university I really interested in politics and international relations. I had a friend which is student an university and she had choosed to Political Sciences department at university. When asked to her why you were choose that department, she told me I had choosed that department beacuse my father had been working for government at that time.We never cut our relationship we are meeting sometimes with her.She has found great job in Minister of Foregin Affairs beacuse of her father.As she got the chance working in there,she was taken great referans by her father.
In the conclusion,children should choose a job which is same with their parents' job for these reasons.A child has huge oppurtinity in terms of find a job and he or she get great experiences about any job. If I had to chanced to worked same job with my father, I would prefered to work same job beacuse of mentioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...nt kind of restorants, cafes and so on. Moreover İstanbul city was effected by Ottoman E...
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Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of problems'.
Suggestion: lots of problems
...nditions. In the other words, there are lots of problem, but one of them is really important. I...
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Line 1, column 615, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kind' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kinds'.
Suggestion: kinds
...m is worther than others in 3 diffirent kind of aspects. İstanbul city had sett...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...others in 3 diffirent kind of aspects. İstanbul city had settlement by the peo...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...an İstanbul city had huge wealth and in this circumstances this city was taken immag...
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Line 4, column 50, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are many companies'?
Suggestion: there are many companies
... İstanbul city has been crowded beacuse there is many companies in the city. Beacuse of that condition ...
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Line 4, column 444, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Only
... they are using same way to go anywhere.Only subway and railway could be more useful...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Beacuse
... more usefull and benefical for citizen.Beacuse these public transportation has thier o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o fix İstanbul citys traffic problem. Although railway and subway the most gr...
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Line 6, column 34, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'greatest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: greatest
.... Although railway and subway the most greatest thing to fix İstanbul city traffic prob...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the greatest'.
Suggestion: most the greatest
.... Although railway and subway the most greatest thing to fix İstanbul city traffic prob...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...f problem. In my opinion government has take some measure to cut to immagretion for ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ct clothes in Sourthern part of Turkey. Moreover that government had been investment for...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...rth part of Turkey. I absoultly support these kind of investment beacuse it means jobs for...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...en student from other cities in Turkey. If government creats some great university...
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Line 8, column 251, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this student' or 'these students'?
Suggestion: this student; these students
...ats some great university in other city these student had never been live in İstanbul city. M...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...t had never been live in İstanbul city. Moreover all these students which they had been ...
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Line 8, column 351, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
... all these students which they had been came in İstanbul. They decided to find thier...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, for example, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2308.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93162393162 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72589616428 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425213675214 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0224904783 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9393939394 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.88709677419 348% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0354391261552 0.236089414692 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0123997358504 0.076458572812 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0203639208221 0.0737576698707 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0219902930942 0.150856017488 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151027026957 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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