It is argued that getting married before Finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Marriage is an essential part of our life. Nowadays, people perform the marriage, once the financial stability is achieved in their life. These days, there is an ongoing debate that whether it is good option to get married before finishing school. In this essay, I will provide my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
In this modern era, everyone wants the best job, according to their education, so that can live happily. The education is the primary need to get the job. Moreover, it is a truth that getting work means money in your pocket. For instance, according to a study done in the University of Texas, higher the degree attained by a person higher the chances of employment and higher will be the income. Therefore, people who cannot complete their high school degree are more likely to face difficulties in a searching job which will have an adverse effect on their income.
Similarly, there is an age of attempting the goals in life. Usually, we cannot say a person should get married in that ages which is actually beneficial and should be allocated for education. For example, a survey done in early 21st century revealed that the number of people who get married early did not achieve their doctoral degree. Hence, it is significant that young people should concentrate on their education before putting themselves in marriage and its outcomes.
To recapitulate marriage before completing education and financially stable is not a good option. The essay discussed the deleterious and detrimental effects of getting married before education and respectable job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05660377358 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67553290507 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8526561369 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217723720391 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792691736371 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895347239701 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145015674315 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416778629083 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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