You have booked a hotel. For some reason you need to change the booking dates and details. Write a letter to the manager of hotel for the same. In your letter-
Give details for the booking which you have made
Inform changes that you want with your booking
State reasons for the changes.
Dear Sir,
My Name is Richa Pandey. I am writing this letter in connection with the reservation of the Deluxe room which I did in your hotel situated at Somnath. I have booked the room for 3 days starting from 2nd November to 5th November 2018 for a family of 4 members.
However, there have been few changes in our travel plan. Initially, the plan was to visit Somnath and then move to Dwarika. But now my family wants to start the tour from Dwarika and then go to Somnath. Because of this, I request you to move our booking for 6th November to 9th November. If there are any complications in doing so then please email me call me on my mobile phone 9757153222.
I am open to move to a different room or pay any extra charges which may result due to this change. Please let me know whether this request can be fulfilled or not before 4th November as it would give me enough time to look for a room somewhere else.
I am looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours Faithfully,
Richa Pandey
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 289, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oking for 6th November to 9th November. If there are any complications in doing so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42631578947 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39661002505 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652631578947 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1982577529 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0833333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233832911573 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750954124702 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728436261041 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128638096837 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706532208174 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.