Shopping is the favourite pastimes for most of the young people. Why do you think is that, do you think they should be encourage to do some others useful activities.
It is universal truth that in early years more youngster individual like to shopping rather than leisure activities such as watching t.v. and playing any sport. I believe that if government prices increase of clothes then people pay more attention in leisure or useful activities.
On the one hand, there are numerous stunning benefits who people more preferred to creative activity. These include enchanced problem solving, independent, and energetic. Firstly, in pastimes it's truthly more advance technology not fully developed so for that they more favourable go to outsides for shopping and restaurants with which they away to stressed then and after feel fresh. Moreover, in early years people more fashionable and they like to show off the status in public place. Therefore, they go to big mall. For instance, many experts believe that in pastimes individual more like to purchased the jewellery, clothes, shoes and cosmetic more than approximately 85 percent of young female spend more money and time in past.
On the other hand, some young people individual like to reading books, playing games and watching movies with family as opposed to shopping. Secondly, in past era youngest people always maintain the kept health so for that they always go to public garden for walking and excercise, gymnastics for improve the muscles and taken it the yoga classes for prevent to the diseases.
In conclusion, it can be seen whereas the shopping has brought some advantages for younger people such as experience, gain knowledge. However, I believe that others useful activities like go to library read the different books and playing games in park more beneficial as compared to shopping
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 726, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
... young female spend more money and time in past. On the other hand, some young people ...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'era the youngest'.
Suggestion: era the youngest
... opposed to shopping. Secondly, in past era youngest people always maintain the kept health ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21691176471 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63786956856 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3673115327 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129783936891 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490849731861 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319612721914 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855379268893 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025212624689 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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