The older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones. What
problems can this create? What are some solutions?
It is true that there are a fierce competition between the elders and the youngsters in the job market today, where this can have a negative impact on the older people. However, this can be solved by the help of the government and the community.
Nowadays, companies and employers tend to hire the younger generations due to their high energy and sustainability, which create unemployment for the elders significantly. Also, the health of the younger workers can endure higher stress from the working areas, whereas the older workers cannot. Moreover, when hire the younger people, the employers can teach them how to do their tasks with the knowing that they can work in the longer period of time compares to the elders.
However, there are a certain things the government or the individual enterprises can do to prevent the unemployment. Firstly, they should create the right jobs that fit their age groups. For example, in Vietnam, people from the age above 40 are likely to work for the Grab and Uber companies as drivers. Secondly, there should be separate jobs that are only for the older workers and vice versa for the younger workers so that they don’t have to compete harshly for the work positions.
In conclusion, there are various barriers that are holding the older workers back from having a job, where they also have to compete with the younger generations. However, more things could be done by the government and individuals in order to help the elders to gain work positions in today’s society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...nowing that they can work in the longer period of time compares to the elders. However, the...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...elders. However, there are a certain things the government or the individual enterp...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96887159533 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63921100956 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517509727626 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6212804783 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.090909091 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230882332433 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881331372014 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054835484349 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146173980097 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029584436956 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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