Many countries use fossil fuels such as coal or oil as the main sources of energy. However, in some countries the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged.Do you think this a positive or negative development?
It is true that nowadays, there are many nations that use non-renewable resources to generate energy. However, there are also many countries replaced fossil fuel by using renewable energy for clean power. I completely believe this is a positive development for the country that use clean energy itself and for the world.
Fossil fuel can do great harm to the environment, such as causing global warming and pollution. Emissions from factories that burn coal polluted the air in the surroundings, and sometimes can also cause acid rain. From my own experience, a few years ago I visited China, during the time when it was well-known for polluted country. When I stayed in Beijing for a few days, I noticed the sky was always gloomy and the city rarely meet sunlight. I also saw on the news in some growing countries like Japan, many students and workers have to wear face masks to go to school and workplace. If Japan widen in using renewable source, such as using solar energy, or wind power, the quality of air can be greatly improve.
Renewable energy not only can give positive effects to the country, but also can help slow down the rising heat of the earth. If the nations using fossil fuel to generate energy sustain this routine, it will affect the world dramatically. The ice is melting, causing the rise in sea level, which will damage not only the habitat of the animals, but also our home.
In conclusion, although many countries already switched to using clean energy, I still encourage more nations and residential areas to widely use renewable energy to help reduce the speed of changes in climate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84172661871 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51320203376 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7678456931 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.538461538 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299698354247 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110189859962 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908149766519 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191810250171 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08434632853 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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