In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Human's lifestyle had undergone several dramatic alterations in a recent couple of decades. Days are one where elderly people used to stay with their families to guide them. They nowadays they are opting to stay in an old-age home with the same age people and they are assisted by nurses. In British countries, this is often, and sporadically the governing bodies will pay for these services. I think it is the government responsibility to pay for the care.
One paramount reason that authorities should look after the senior citizens are, they served for the nation (directly or indirectly). In many countries, the minimum retiring age is around 58-60 years, and people need to work for at least 30-35 years for the government or pay an adequate amount of tax if they work in a non-government firm. As a result, they can have some post-retirement benefits. In countries like Canada and Ireland, governments will have some excess tax of 5% of their total income for these benefits and use the money for old-age homes and hospitality. In brief, Its should be a pay-back time for the countries to look after the matured people when they are in need.
Moreover, elderly people are often orthodox and feel that they are a burden to the family. Although, they worked for the family for the whole life, after retirement they do not want to be an obstacle. Additionally, people who are in service commission are entitled to be in a retirement home after the early ages as they worked for the nation to grew up. In a country like India, there are almost 17000 retirement homes allocated to services like army, navy, and air-force. Matured people will be in these houses because they do not want to be a hurdle to their family
In conclusion, people want to live in retirement houses after they grew old. As the government is the prime module who got benefited, it is the task of governing bodies to look after them and pay for their hospitality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, at least, i think, in brief, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74852071006 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6575574506 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494082840237 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3894614194 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428242551657 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151230862917 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950145669928 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289267770073 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692303084125 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.