Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Agree and Disagree.
The important effect of effective learning which was always debatable, but has now become more controversial. The sustainable influence of effective learning has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on over the year. It can be said that effective learning requires time, comfort, and peace so it is impossible to combines study and employment. This essay have both the positive and negative impact.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why effective learning requires time, comfort, and peace but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that the student achieve there goal by spending a more time on study ,with concentration and efforts. For instance, student can obtained a good marks by full concentration on there goal if they do various thing on that time they can't study and give a full time on it.
Another key justification for upholding this notion is that if student can study with full concentration they achieve there goal. For instance, some student are doing job with study that have both positive and negative impact. For example, some student do job for there own self to pay fees of there own and not want to responsible to there parents.
From what we have discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of effective learning need time, comfort and peace is prominent, although it depend on the student mind if they learn easily they can do job and study together in my opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9631147541 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6457608338 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504098360656 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8786039237 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.1 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.25397266985 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331613563205 0.242375264174 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152246622869 0.0925447433944 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197052488093 0.071462118173 276% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215471653183 0.151781067708 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131511395897 0.0609392437508 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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