The diagram shows the stages of processing cocoa beans
Overall, the process diagram shows how cocoa beans are collected, processed and the finished products finally delivered to consumers.
As is exhibited in the flow chart, fresh cocoa beans are picked, and then the shells removed before the beans are dried. The dry cocoa beans undergo pressing, after which the cocoa beans are turned into cocoa cake that will undergo further pressing and industrial chocolate that will undergo further refining. During the process of further pressing, cocoa cake is ground into cocoa powder and cocoa liquor. The powder is sold to consumers while the liquor is used in industries for the production of cakes and drinks. During further refining, sugar is added to industrial chocolate and finally processed into finished chocolate products that are then sold to consumers.
On the whole, the process of processing cocoa into finished products involves three stages, the major being stage two and stage three.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, then, while, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32666666667 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3506878426 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8179211066 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446362997948 0.215688989381 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205076619639 0.103423049105 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142510320872 0.0843802449381 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332324450696 0.15604864568 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954784112653 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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