Nowadays people have more and more responsibilities and in the hurry of the day by day people tend to hurry up everything they do so they can finish the tasks of that day and maybe have time for rest or be with their families, that being said doing thing in a hurry can also cause some trouble, it is well known that people tend to cause disaster when they do things in a run. Haste makes waste?
Personally, I believe that everything that you do with calm will have a great result but there are some things that we can do fast and have a good or the same result, and that is because we are accustomed to do that every day, for instance traffic accidents are one of the best examples that haste makes waste, however I go to school every morning and use the same directions, therefore I know the way so I can hurry a little bit more, not the same as if I didn’t know the directions to the place where I am going , in that case I would drive slow and with caution. Another good example that haste makes waste is the fact that when you do things in a hurry you tend to leave things behind or end up doing everything wrong, in my opinion this statement is true only when you do something you aren’t used to or that you don’t do on your daily bases, like cooking or cleaning.
Finally, however it is well known that if you take your time to do things you will get a good result haste can make waste when people try to go fast on activities they don’t perform in their day by day or that they simple don’t do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... disaster when they do things in a run. Haste makes waste? Personally, I beli...
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Suggestion: accustomed to doing
...same result, and that is because we are accustomed to do that every day, for instance traffic ac...
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...erefore I know the way so I can hurry a little bit more, not the same as if I didn't ...
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...y you tend to leave things behind or end up doing everything wrong, in my opinio...
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...hings behind or end up doing everything wrong, in my opinion this statement is t...
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...t is true only when you do something you aren't used to or that you don&apos...
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...s;t do on your daily bases, like cooking or cleaning. Finally, however it is w...
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...perform in their day by day or that they simple don't do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22448979592 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30315472541 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.1344086022 288% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.921760774 48.9658058833 367% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 248.4 100.406767564 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.8 20.6045352989 285% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.2 5.45110844103 316% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22236339212 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152954263501 0.076458572812 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624107973924 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157903884802 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706142341335 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.8 11.7677419355 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 37.99 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.1575268817 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.08 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 86.8835125448 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.0537634409 251% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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