It is impossible to deny the fact that both science and arts are the two critical aspects of today’s society. Although some people believe that arts is more important than science, in my opinion, I believe that science is more important as it contributes to advanced technologies, as well as, increased productivity, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, scientists and engineers designed and developed the latest technologies which cannot be achieved by arts. For example, the technologies on internet and smart phones which allow video conferencing and international call have successfully contributed to globalization and help people connect to each other without the hassle of traveling. Therefore, without science information and ideas are hard to get across between individuals and nations. As a result, the development of technology is a beneficial result of science.
Furthermore, another reason making science more important is that science, rather than arts, increased productivity. The advanced machines and manufacturing processes developed by engineers and scientists were found to increase 70% of the productivity in Germany in the past ten years according to one of the studies done by Sydney University. Hence, science boosted productivity in society and eventually lead to economic growth.
In conclusion, science is more important than arts because science contributes to increased productivity and promotes the development of technology. Governments should increase funding used for those purposes and raise public awareness of scientific achievements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79746835443 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25808348231 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599156118143 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9280272595 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.909090909 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.25397266985 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298681788572 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106995743088 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12614579061 0.071462118173 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187525522351 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110121045365 0.0609392437508 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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