A large proportion of people live and work in other countries today than at any time in the past. it is very proble that in the future there will be no borders and people will be freely between countries.
To what extent do you agree with this opinion.
Nowadays, there are so many people live and work in other countries, and it became common with us. I’m totally disagree that there will no more international borders in the future and we will able to work and live in as many countries as we want.
On the one hand, open borders may help people have more opportunities to find a good place to live or find a well-paid job to do in some wealthy countries. Secondly, those countries may be overpopulated because of refugees and immigrants, who come to find jobs and a good environment to live in. And the crime rate might rise extremely high.
At the same, we would lose our national identity if we reside in a different country and live with local people for a long time, about 10 or 20 years and we will able to forget our own language. In my opinion, it would cause some problems if we open the international borders like damage the nature, destroy animal’s habitats. The amount of immigrants increase also lead to the requirement of housing, apartments. That is why we have to cut down tree, exploit the forest to build houses and places to people, and the natural materials will be exhausted soon in the future. Vehicles is indispensable factor for people, and the emissions of cars and bikes can make dramatically problem to nature.
In conclusion, open international borders may have some benefits for the world but for me, there are more disadvantages of opening borders than the advantages it will make to our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71923076923 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78441085097 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.731530779 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.545454545 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244514571717 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838337988638 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692259228915 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149965505932 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073819768441 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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