In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?
The growing demand of people to have all the required products under one roof has resulted in the evolution of shopping centres. It has been observed recently that local shopkeepers are affected in the worst manner which even led to the closure of their shops. This essay will argue this development as positive despite having the above-mentioned drawback.
The limited availability of different products at local businesses forced customers to opt for shopping malls. These shops generally sell a limited number of products which won’t cater all the needs of a buyer. The decreasing number of customers led these shops to close down and making the owners jobless. As a result, these business owners either opt for some other business or look for a job in order to support their family.
Shopping malls, on the other hand, serve several benefits for consumers as well as job seekers. The customers get an option to choose among a wide range of options along with various lucrative offer which customers find impossible to resist. For instance, a supermarket like Coles in Australia gives an option to get grocery, toiletries, dairy, meat, kitchenette and bakery items under one roof on a discounted price. Along with shopping, these centres provide options to dine and indoor entertainment. Moreover, malls provide hundreds of jobs to individuals which helps the society in reducing the unemployment rate.
In conclusion, it is true that local businesses are shutting down because people are moving towards these shopping hubs but these shopping malls in return meeting the needs of the customer and also benefiting society by providing employment to job seekers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23791821561 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72394582822 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587360594796 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0538938362 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244959333086 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835668615741 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053240225866 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150315002684 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492542267918 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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