In the last century when human astronaut first arrived on the Moon he said: "Space exploration is a big step for mankind". But
some pleople think it makes little difference to our daily life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people about the positive and negative effects on society due to space exploration. While it is possible to claim that universe discovery is good only for education, my point of view that the new innovations came for us because of the space discovery. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view while analysing different sides of the argument to a greater extent.
First and foremost, there are myriad of benefits a nation can gain because of space travels such as life quality, integrity and confidentiality improvement, high security, portability, availability, usability and disaster recovery. For example, telecommunicate and wireless technology has improved to a greater extent because of space travels, and as result, we all use this in our day-to-day life. Therefore, it is considered that the space-travelling as the best way for new innovations.
On the other hand, those who believed the other side of the argument have a different point of view and say that the space exploration bests only for studies. For example, most of the mathematical formulas used in space and astrology calculations cannot use in our daily life. Therefore, it is taken into consideration that the space exploration is a theory. But those people cannot discover the brighter side of the argument.
In conclusion, it is believed that the space exploration is a risky job, but new things will add to our daily life. In nutshell, it is strongly believed that the governments' and professionals should encourage space discovery projects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20233463035 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12413805885 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540856031128 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2942131109 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.416666667 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109671303498 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437763453608 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341912230003 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709620067802 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166574442515 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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