Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
The major capital cities of the world are highly crowded. Overpopulation is one of the threatening problem in this century and governments need to take action on this problem in order to avoid development of other consequences. In this essay, the major factors behind the cites overcrowded and solutions are explained.
Firstly, factor that directly effects the population of a city, is its business opportunity. Due to their attractive opportunities, most major cities are filled and congested with people from different part of the worlds. Also, the convenience urban plan and transportation attract the migrants to stay in the capital cities. For instance, even though Australia demands migrants with different skill sets for development of their country, state government announced that Sydney and Queensland have already been overly crowded. Therefore, governments require to develop the strategies to equalize the population all over the countries.
There are several ways to handle the population from major cities. The most important things are creating the business opportunities and the cheap housings at the rural area which are the basic needs for a civilian to survive. Furthermore, developing a tax allowances plan for people living in rural cities will also encourage them to move from capital to rural cities. On the other hand, authorities can also limit the entrance of new migrants to major populated cities.
To conclude, equalization of population is very important for equal development of a country. It cannot be denied that the capital cities are full with business opportunities and easier to survive but if governments can develop similar opportunities and better allowances plan in rural cities, the equal distribution of population will be an achievable goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'developing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: developing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49458483755 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02837523694 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545126353791 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2029914831 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.714285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166506602965 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635842641207 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750855265846 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121537357773 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128315163514 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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