Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the modern world more and more tourists tend to visit unusual tourist destinations where conditions are uncomfortable such as the Sahara Desert and the Antarctic. I think there are many benefits for travelers such as exploring new directions and learning about new facts despite difficult conditions in these types of places.
It is a well known fact that the most tours are developed by tourist operators for tourists to go to famous countries. In recent years people want to find out about other different places to discover new knowledge and experience. The main benefit of visiting places such as the Sahara Desert and the Antarctic is that it offers a unique experience for the adventurous travelers who want to get away from it all. Nature of these places is impressive with spectacular scenery. And people will have the rare opportunity to camp in a remote part of the countryside for example in the Antarctic and experience life with local people at its most unspoiled.
However, travelling to such places like the Deserts and the Antarctic has drawbacks because of the conditions. For example, in the Deserts there are fewer tours developed by tourist companies and some of them offer not appropriate and comfortable accommodation or transfer. People can meet difficulties to get to some destinations from the Airports because of lack of transport. Moreover, the weather conditions in such places like the Antarctic can be extremely uncomfortable and people can get stuck because of biting frost or blizzards.
In our contemporary life with stress at work, some problems in relationships or other troubles, visiting such amazing places can give an unforgettable and exciting experience. But it also can give some people negative feelings because of conditions in these places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20689655172 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93768818812 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4361784324 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.153846154 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348266450505 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120703426964 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109833087634 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223859227835 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120608881353 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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