It is widely known that waste disposal is increased to great extent in past few years. This essay portrays the issue faced because of increase in waste and possible solutions of reducing waste.
Firstly, people because of current lifestyle, they buy convenience food that are packed in plastic boxes. They throw plastic boxes, bottles, packets in road side after having lunch. Moreover, when waste is dumped to larger extent, it poses health hazards. Secondly, people have poor mindset of throwing away waste in beach side as yard wastes inspite of fact that it could affect pollution.
Most importantly, the possible solutions for diminishing waste accrual are following 3R's approach for changing their way of lifestyle. Significantly people need to reduce the plastic waste and yard waste and in some cases dispose them in dustbins. Later, government should take steps to recycle garbage from dustbins. Some of paper waste is reused after recycling for use as student notebooks. Finally, government should conduct awareness camps changing mindset of general public to reduce unwanted material.
In conclusion, 3R approach and government camps should reduce garbage to considerable level. If government follow these approaches, increase in garbage levels would soon drop.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5076142132 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57347890644 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644670050761 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6598229216 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.4615384615 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0510858014944 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0211268395647 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251913340842 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0357883085058 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223091568063 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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