Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
It is true that children play an important role in society so that parents should give them proper care and attention. However, I disagree with the idea of making childcare training courses compulsory for all people.
There are several reasons why people should learn how to raise their children. The main reason is that they are the ones who have the most influence on the development of children. As new-born babies and primary children spend most of their time with parents, they may imitate the behaviors of their fathers and mothers and rely on them to develop characteristics and logical abilities. Therefore, if parents fail in childbearing, it will significantly affect the mental health as well as the traits of young people. For instance, string parents can make people become shy and nervous when they are adults, while lenient parents often spoil their children that these young people may grow up arrogant and irresponsible.
However, making childcare training course courses compulsory for all parents is not the good practice for several reasons. Firstly, not all people can afford the tuition fees for these courses, and attending these courses may put more pressure on the economics of their family. Secondly, these days, most people are suffering from excessive workloads that they may not have enough time for their children. The more time they spend on childcare training courses, the less time they have for family, and that may adversely affect the mental health of their children.
In conclusion, while childcare training courses have their merits, they should not be made compulsory for all parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19391634981 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53640383561 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513307984791 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5185139483 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21718845061 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953539843593 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542594055051 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163543972932 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454823344734 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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