Some People think that family has an influence on child's development, while others think that there are many factors that influence child such as television, music and friends.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, It is important to consider that who affect more on child's development. It is thought by some people that family has an influence on child's skill, whereas others argue that other factors such as entertainment media and friends influence more since children spend most of the time with this factors than family. I agree with the latter view.
In the 21st century, it is difficult for parents to survive in cut-throat competition. As a result, parents have to work, and consequently, there is an improper nourishment for developing their offspring's intellectual and cognitive skills. To illustrate this, A recent study by the leading newspaper The Times shows that seven out of ten students are not able to perform basic skills which they do not learn from their parents due to a busy timetable. Therefore, in this era, parents have the least time for their child which leads to lesser child development.
On the other hand, because lack of parent's guide adolescent has to emerge themselves with the television or music or with their friends. It is often time seen that many children learn basic skills from those factors which they have to obtain from their parents. For instance, a discovery channel programme shows that how to count with the help of fruits, vegetables and animals. By watching this, children can develop their conceptual skill which is a basic of any other skills. From the above example, it can be said that children spend more time with those factors than a family which leads to more influence on them.
In conclusion, due to competitive era parents have not enough time to spend with their children because of the above reason. I personally believe that friends and entertainment media have a greater influence on a child's development because they spend more time with those factors.
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Suggestion: effect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, whereas, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00328947368 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63116567479 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496710526316 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4900980391 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.642857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170993128982 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651334757281 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765699378431 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127470967034 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104211920288 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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