Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree?
In many countries criminals are sent to prison as part of legal system. criminals have to be separated from the rest of society to prevent harm. while other solutions like education has some benefit, prisons continue to have the best value to protect societies and provide skills and knowledge to prisoners.
admittedly, education is a very important way to avoid crimes. Nations with high percentages of educated citizens have lower crime rates. education can reduce crime rates not only by offering better jobs, but also by teaching young generation what is right and what is wrong. However, the effect of education is only minimal and can only prevent minor crimes. For example, many youth can be educated to avoid driving under the influence of alcohol in order to reduce road traffic crashes.
With prisons every member in the society feels safe. With that I mean citizens will trust the judicial system in that society, including law enforcement measures, if criminals are jailed in prisons. Women, men and children could walk at day time or night with out the fear of being robbed or assaulted. Research has shown that the presence of jails in a city has two-times higher rate of people satisfaction and more than a half reduction in crime rates.
jails could be a good place to rehabilitate criminals. criminals could learn new skills or have a higher education. if criminals have determination and the capacity to self-improvement, then they will have an opportunity to do so while in jail. Throughout history, for instance, we have heard of prisoners who had graduated from a renowned university or even finished their PHD degrees during their years in prison.
In conclusion, although education has some value in reducing crime rates, prisons plays more of a role in controlling violence, securing societies and educating prisoners. Governments should invest more in prisons to make them ideal places in achieving prisons goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Criminals
...sent to prison as part of legal system. criminals have to be separated from the rest of s...
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Suggestion: While
...om the rest of society to prevent harm. while other solutions like education has some...
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Suggestion: Admittedly
...kills and knowledge to prisoners. admittedly, education is a very important way to a...
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Suggestion: Education
...ucated citizens have lower crime rates. education can reduce crime rates not only by offe...
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Suggestion: many youths
...only prevent minor crimes. For example, many youth can be educated to avoid driving under ...
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Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...hildren could walk at day time or night with out the fear of being robbed or assaulted. ...
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Suggestion: Jails
...an a half reduction in crime rates. jails could be a good place to rehabilitate c...
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Suggestion: Criminals
...a good place to rehabilitate criminals. criminals could learn new skills or have a higher...
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Suggestion: If
... new skills or have a higher education. if criminals have determination and the ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i mean, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16352201258 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7400675927 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606918238994 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2731042666 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154339407505 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453046702649 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345346395308 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812064911908 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248451136416 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.