Prison is a common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable that crime which is impossible to find a panacea for is a perennial problem in society. While I agree that prison is a regular solution to curb crime in various nations, it is wrong to reject the argument in favor of a better education.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why incarceration is a necessity in the law system of every countries. First of all, imprisonment offers innocent citizens a peaceful life. When wrongdoers are incarcerated, they will be isolated from society. This strengthen public security so that law-abiding residents are no longer scared when they go out late at night. In contrast, lack of prison leads to the increase in felonies. Offenders who is not sentenced for his misdeeds are likely pose threat to the safety of other people. Secondly, the prison systems exist to turn criminals into good characters. In fact, lawbreakers will benefit from moral lessons or rehabilitation programs in penitentiary to reflect on their behavior. As a spell in jail has deterrent effects, it would stop prisoners from breaking laws again.
On the other hand, I also believe that a better education is an effective method that nations could apply. Firstly, education at home plays an important role to provide a young child with foundation. Children can learn social etiquette right on the dinner table. Likewise, parent also play a role model who instill good habit into children. They can teach their children to learn that hard work pays off and guide them walk on the right way in their lives. Therefore, children are aware of the differences between good and bad things since childhood. Furthermore, when children enter formal education at school, they will be provided with well preparation before growing up. School is a miniature society where children can meet with their peers and learn to obey rules.
In conclusion, it is ludicrous to compare incarceration with a better education because they are equally important
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0736196319 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78453950965 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622699386503 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8562901627 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.7 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11022273284 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302373999808 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482297217297 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808562075236 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758530695386 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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