Over a few decades global warming has becoming a major concern in the term of environmental devastation while others people argue that the urgent to the prevent deforestation should be taken first rather than other dillemas. Eventhough both global warming and deforestation are impacting the environment, I believe that they are considerable equal.
The warming trend profoundly effec to the world which being more vulnerable. Increasing of the temperature level because of emission from Greenhouse gaseous which lead to global warming conditions are become the first factor of the extent of Artic sea ice. This is mean so that the rising of sea-level continue massively increase and threat both low-lying island and coastal communities in peril. Futhermore, unpredictable weather patterns occur in almost of all continent which this put that city and town are becoming vulnerable to the strom, hurricanes, flooding, and wildfires and may create certain uncontrollably epidemic. However, I tend to argue that the others enviromental problems also contribute to the worsening of the environment.
In the other hand, the cutting down of tropical jungle which known as the lung of the earth owing to the deforestation is become rapidly increase because of economic concession ; therefore contributing to the broken ecosystem. While the following reason thus jungle being cut down, protected species are more likely declined and more begin exacerbated. For example, Orang Utan in Borneo Tropical Island is rarely to see and its number degrade due to the deforestation impacts.
To conclude, I believe not only global warming has been threaten the world and humanities as a whole, but also deforestation has equal drawbacks to the enviroment.
- Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.To what extent do yo u agree with this statement? 78
- Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Other think money and appearance are more important.Disscuss both sides and give your opinion. 84
- some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environmental problems and instead increase funding into urgent and more threatening issues such as global warming To what extent do you agree 70
- Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social, and commercial prespective.What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce there pressures ? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: threatened
...elieve not only global warming has been threaten the world and humanities as a whole, bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47407407407 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0050134441 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607407407407 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6932740681 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285312509097 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107211868631 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767328039192 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170081643348 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778220834754 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.