Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, large numbers of people are opting to travel both domestically and internationally than ever before. Massive globalization, tourism and business opportunities are the few reasons. Travelers are undoubtedly, reaping great benefits through travelling.
Firstly, travelling has become a great economic activity for airlines, travel agents, countries and travelers itself. One such example is lucrative discounts being offered by the airlines. This attracts a large number of tourists to visit that particular city or country. For instance, I have traveled to Dubai last year on a business class after getting 50% discount on my airfare, through my travel agent. I saved that money used it for shopping and eat out with my friends in Dubai. Additionally, I have earned air miles/ rewards travelling through business class and these can be used whenever I decide to travel next time.
Secondly, travelling has become a great source of learning regarding different cultures, languages and cuisines. Travelling makes one bold, confident, and intellectual. I have learned about Chinese language, Arabic culture and Japanese cuisine during my travels to these countries.
Thirdly, travelling is the key to strategic business networking and partnerships. People from one part of the world to other part travel in search of meeting prospectus clients and to showcase their products and services. For instance, my company has participated in Textile Exhibition in Germany and secured a large order for towels and bathrobes.
In conclusion, travelling is a great source of learning and grooming oneself. It teaches about different regions, cultures and languages. Travelling helps in boosting economic activities which helps in eradicating poverty in tourism dependent countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 204, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... offered by the airlines. This attracts a large number of tourists to visit that particular city ...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to regard'.
Suggestion: to regard
...g has become a great source of learning regarding different cultures, languages and cuisi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67790262172 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01772736504 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61797752809 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5746461647 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.2222222222 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305752858135 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953457968076 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648483388692 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169211414277 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490376740293 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.07 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.