Some people think that the main factors influencing a child's development these days are things such as television, friends, and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this modern world, development of child is of great concern. Television, friends and music are the key elements to influence child's development, other people argues that family plays a greater role. In my opinion, although learning from telecast, peer group and music are beneficial for child, the importance of family cannot be ignored.
On the one hand, television acts as a knowledge center, friends plays a role of supporter and music makes children happy. In other words, child can learn as well as enjoy their journey to become adult, if they have all the above mentioned factors. The studies also support that child develops key skills through TV, close friends and listening or playing any musical instruments.
On the other hand, child learns their native language and culture from family. Every language and culture have their own importance and it should be taught to every next generation to keep them viable and one should nurture it. Learning language helps a child to communicate and ask for the needs, while culture teaches them about the existence and moral of life. It is also evident that child living with family are less prone to fall in depression, when compared with child living alone, hence, importance of family on child's mental strength cannot be ignored.
In my opinion, both views have their own importance. The child learns faster from friends rather than from family. Similarly, family acts as a backbone for child, to tackle any circumstances in life, they are always there to support, what may ever come.
In conclusion, with all the benefits discussed above, about TV, friends and music, family also has its own importance in child's development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, similarly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09712230216 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48923202467 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557553956835 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3509199125 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178523722348 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714064749341 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495191342545 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114642523223 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519969656467 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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