73)Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Computers have unquestionably have changed human beings life in many ways. About a decade back, computers were not popular and many people were reluctant to learn computer language and skills. A few years later, computer became a part of human's life. Behind any innovation there will be some merits and demerits. Computer is one of the greatest humankind's invention. In my view, computers have significantly made our life easy and convenient.
First of all, today computer plays a vital role in everybody's life, computers are practically used in everything. In businesses and companies work cant be done without computers. Before hiring in companies candidates are asked about computer skills. For instance, companies run their business with the help of computers, they can store millions of documents, financial transaction and many more on their computers. And nowadays, even business conferences are held online with the help of face-to-face communication without traveling to other place to contact with other countries associates. It is very difficult to track each and every activities taken place in the business without the access of computer. Whereas now, by the single click on the computer we can know employees attendance, performance report, finance report and many more.
In addition, computers have spread its importance in every fields and also in regional areas. In many small towns people are being educated about computer and in schools it is a compulsory subject for students to learn, government provide computers to many schools. Computer have cut down our time, it is very easy and convenient to do all the work. For instance, banking sector have remarkably improved its work. Now everything is computerized, with the help of core banking, internet banking people can transact or maintain their balance without any trouble. A person can transfer money through internet banking or pay his/her bills online, no need to stand in long lines. Everything is paperless transaction, so no need to worry about missed bills.
Furthermore, computer works as educational tool and also entertainment devise. Students can learn online with videos and audio, which are more motivating for them to learn, complete their assignments though computer. For instance, watch the science experiments as many times as they want. There are so many creative materials for children to develop their knowledge, with the help to power point students can do their presentations even more effectively. Moreover, on computer we can watch movies or book movie tickets online, play music, play video games and many more interesting activities. Even door and windows are computerized to open and close.
In short, computer have definitely changed our life's and made it easy to do so many tasks. Everything runs on computer, businesses can do business through computer, people can do financial transactions without going to bank. Children can learn more effectively with various materials. People relay more on computer from morning to night.
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Computers have unquestionably have changed human beings life in many ways
Computers unquestionably have changed human beings life in many ways
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Avg. Sentence Length: 15.933 21.0 need more compound or complex sentences.
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today computer plays a vital role in everybody's life, computers are practically used in everything.
today computer plays a vital role in everybody's life and computers are practically used in everything.
For instance, companies run their business with the help of computers, they can store millions of documents
For instance, companies run their business with the help of computers which can store millions of documents
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2. Don't forget punctuation marks. for example:
In businesses and companies work cant be done without computers.
In businesses and companies, works cant be done without computers.
Before hiring in companies candidates are asked about computer skills.
Before hiring in companies, candidates are asked about computer skills.
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