“The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.”
The human race has evolved passing an uncountable number of hustles with the help of coöperation and coexistence. Most of the species on this planet have evolved as social beings finally. The concept of social togetherness makes this world a better place to live in. Every problem has a solution and it may not be individualism always, most of the times a problem appears to be so small when dealt alongside peers and not by opposing them.
The statement poses a beautiful perception that cooperation is the key to prepare society's youth for leadership, government and such other fields. This clearly tries to showcase the importance of cooperation in the fields where competition is assumed to be a necessary solution.
As perceived in the statement, society is itself a group of people who share various common interests. They are supposed to share the resources in a friendly nature, and not competing for them. Every living creature is somehow a part of some ecology. Every ecology that exists on this planet is interdependent all the elements of an ecological system depends on one particular part for a particular purpose. Similarly, society is a social ecology where every human is a specific and unique part of this ecology. An ecology cannot survive if its associated parts just compete among themselves without sharing and cooperating.
The last example states that human society is a complexly woven web of connections, where every connection influences the other. Such a greatly connected network is to be taken towards development by enhancing all the existing strings rather than competition to enhance a single string. Once if all the humans start cooperating instead of competing among themselves, it builds a beautiful society that is being dreamt right from the inception of social life.
Life is a puzzle to be solved by all the elements in the given set, one can't win the game by decorating a single piece for whole time, rather all the pieces are to be joined to complete the puzzle. Thus, cooperation is the best solution where competition might seem to be an option.
- Men and women should have equal set of tasks in-spite of their physical differences. 50
- "The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies 70
- While some leaders in government, sports, industry, and other areas attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperation. 51
- If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable. 50
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 73, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... all the elements in the given set, one cant win the game by decorating a single pie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, similarly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02578796562 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84300760821 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553008595989 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8701146531 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.176470588 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.17647058824 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114637731389 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385559347789 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455847667517 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668622429728 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472041947727 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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