TPO 25 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no shortage of debate whether young people nowadays do not give enough time in helping their communities. In my humble opinion, I believe that young generation are more active in helping the community to grow and prosperous. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, teenagers have more social awareness in their environment due to the widespread of technology and social media. This platforms encourages young generation to make a stand to make our society better place to live in. For instance, there is a social event in our city Paranaque and it is advertised in social media like instagram and facebook. Youngsters share this campaign about tree planting in mainstream facebook and many responded in this activity, so many people want to help rebuild the community in BF homes and they planted different kinds of tree. The activity were successful the park is planted with 100 trees and some of the volunteer pledged to help in the maintenance of the place like watering of the plants and daily sweeping of the area. Our Mayor is planning of other campaigns which can help our city greener and healthier environment for the citizens.
Secondly, young individual are interested in supporting the community with fund for a cause concert. This concert will help the victims of the typhoon Yolanda it was organized by college students in Manila. For instance, Feu students organized a concert which includes local artist, the funds will be allocated to the yolanda survivors including for their food, shelter and clothing. Many people all over walks of lives wanted to contribute with this fund for a cause, they devoted their time and attention in making the activity be successful. The concert generated 50,000 pesos and it is a huge start to help the typhoon survivor to start again their lives. To sum up, people in this generation are more willing to voice out their concern to the public and reach awareness to the current situation of their society, thus, making it more easier to help other people have their lives more pleasant and comfortable.
To summarize, I believe that teenagers are more helpful with their communities because they are more aware of what is going on with their community. Also, they are helping their place to be more peaceful and healthier place to live in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'encourage'.
Suggestion: encourage
...nology and social media. This platforms encourages young generation to make a stand to mak...
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Line 3, column 640, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... the park is planted with 100 trees and some of the volunteer pledged to help in the mainte...
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Line 5, column 835, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ation of their society, thus, making it more easier to help other people have their lives m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, i feel, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9298245614 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58198403194 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498746867168 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4683543767 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.705882353 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4705882353 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185932618748 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694037163166 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879150245056 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138011158988 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784929272444 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.