Dear Mr. Smith,
I am John who lives in second floor of this flat. Actually, I am going to ask you for giving me a chance if I could pay the rent of house by delay.
To tell the truth, I am facing with some financial problems. I am going to participate in an important exam that is going to happen in two days and it costed me a fortune and as I have lost my job recently, had to spend all my money on that and no money has been remained to go for paying the rent.
I would be really thankful if you could do me that favour. I promise to pay the rent of this months until the end of the next month.
I thank you in advance because of being so considerate.
Yours Sincerely,
F. BAGHERI
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Dear Sir,
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing good. I am writing this letter to request you to allow me pay house rent after 1 month.
I am going through a tough time financially as I’m not working from past 3 months. Addition to this, I got my son admitted to new school, which can't be further delayed, as he is already 4 years old. Due to such circumstances I am left with no money to pay house rent.
I have started work on couple of new projects and the clients have assured me to pay upfront for the deliverable's. So, request you to kindly grand me extension for rent payment by 2 weeks. I will be able to pay rent on 8th May. I assure you that such delay won’t happen in future.
I hope this will be acceptable to you. Please contact me if it is a problem for you.
Kind Regards,
Mahesh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hankful if you could do me that favour. I promise to pay the rent of this months ...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...at favour. I promise to pay the rent of this months until the end of the next month....
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ths until the end of the next month. I thank you in advance because of being s...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, really, second, so, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 564.0 937.175257732 60% => OK
No of words: 140.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.02857142857 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24744753179 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 169.2 290.88556701 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1264059143 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211986193145 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983932077807 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704921770019 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118427840435 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411760839188 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.8 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.06 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 41.2886597938 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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