Today, more and more people are choosing to live in other countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living abroad.
Nowadays, rather than living in mother-land, an increasing number of people have been migrating to other countries. This trend has derived some benefits likewise some drawbacks.
People who choose to come to foreign countries discover the new thing. In a new place, the difference about culture, economy, policy catches them by surprise. For example, some Asian people who come to European countries seem greatly amused because of the independence of young people. They make decisions by themselves especially money, they learn how to invest their money and use the profit to pay for their interests. While Asian teenagers need their parents to help them in everything such as: commuting to school or what they eat for lunch. Moreover, some Westerner feels amused because of the Asian family value. In Asia, the relationship between family members is extremely steadfast. Grandparents and the children live together in happiness while most of the old people in Western live in the nursing home. Besides, people living abroad become stronger and more adaptive to the unfamiliar environment because of the lack of support from their family in finance and emotion. For instance: In a foreign country, they fight with their boyfriends or girlfriends without seeking the solace from their families, so they have to overcome every pain and disappointment alone. As a result, they are strong enough to move on their way. Furthermore, they attempt to have part-time to get enough money to pay as the consequence the high standard of living in other countries.
On the contrary, the culture shock they get is one of the most challenges. They cannot adopt the modifications of culture, weather, food, and lifestyle. Everything becomes to differ from the motherland. It is tough to make friends because of the barrier of language or lifestyle. The changing of weather makes them get sick which accompanies with the loneliness of suffering everything alone leads to depression. Some of them cannot overcome and decide to commit suicide. This is the most serious pain they leave behind their families and friends. Some people get unfamiliar with the opposite of social etiquettes. For example, In the USA, kissing in the public is normal because they would like to express their love romantically. But in Vietnam, people tend to hide their love inside and kissing in public is disgusting. Also, people are easier to lose themselves when facing new things and values. Because of the lack of advice of family members and the requirement of having friends, they are easily depraved since they follow the bad guy ‘advices to get troubles in other words drug addict. Some people abandon their traditional values, alter themselves, forget who they are and where they come from in order to be violent reactionaries and betray their country.
In conclusion, living abroad has advantages and disadvantages depends on how people think and behave.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 41.998997996 193% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2462.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 474.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.194092827 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72657431239 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525316455696 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.9 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3620771791 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9285714286 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82142857143 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183732897586 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489432996455 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807429105618 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164263510404 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095814100337 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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