Internet is an important part in our life. What is advantages and disadvantages of the Internet.
In modern life, the Internet plays a vital role. Besides the benefits of the Internet, there are many drawbacks it brings to our life.
Internet helps us access the information much more easily. We can deny that we can contain quickly the information we need. For example, if you would like to know about the ocean, you just go to google and type “ocean”, you can get millions of results about the ocean. The more precisely you type, the more accurate the results you need. Moreover, it is a convenient way to broaden knowledge. Many students choose to study online rather than go to the university which is extremely boring and passive. They feel comfortable and active when they study online, they can learn everywhere like at home, at a coffee shop, etc, and not depend on the lecturers who can cancel the classes if they cannot arrange their schedule. There are more and more websites help the users extend deep knowledge and get the certificates from many famous universities such as Harvard, Cambridge, etc.
On the other hands, One of the most serious negative impacts of the internet is the users can be addictive by the Internet. Today, there are many people immerse in the virtual life and neglect daily activities, they cannot concentrate on their work since they are greatly absorbed in thinking what they will post on Facebook or how they can get more followers. Furthermore, people have to face the risk of leaking private personal information on the Internet. Many bad guys can take advantage of your information for the harmful purposes, in other words, extorting money. Another drawback is Internet makes people become passive, be lazy for outdoor activities such as going swimming, hitting hangout with friends. They will become less sympathetic with the events happen in the world, fewer experiences and lose the enthusiasm in what they do.
In conclusion, the internet has brought many benefits as well as drawbacks and this depends on the way people use it.
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| 2018-12-12 | Nguyen Tran Quynh Thu | 84 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 887, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95223880597 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62609215206 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582089552239 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4877972307 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5882352941 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166570895734 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687322421136 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812170887738 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148478761955 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110969158858 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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