Modern world Witnessed a hike in medical technology as well as people adopting healthy habits resulted in an increased lifespan for people. Even though we all for sure need to live long, there are some ill effects in this long life which will effect the person and society. We can see some bad aspects of lengthy life and possible remedies in this essay.
In our society the children under 15 and the people over 60 is considered as dependent people. Increase in the ratio of dependent people is a threat to the economy of the country and the society. There should be provision for taking care of them, medications food shelter and other essential needs. Improvement in healthcare and other preventive aspects of health increased the life expectancy for people all over the world. One family with more dependent will be a burden to the one who is earning for them, sickness and other family issues will worsen the issue. Older people are more dependent and need assistant in almost all activities, this will cost a lot of energy, time and materials. Governments need to arrange a huge amount of money for giving pension and healthcare assistance to the old. Productivity is very redused in older ages and it will cause lose for companies who employees them, besides it will cause loss of opportunities for the young, it can worsen unemployment.
So far there is no major strategies to sort out this issues, as we cannot ignore the old, still we can find some practical measures for this issue. We can reduce the impact to the society considerably by lot of means like, educating them for selfcare activities. Providing assisting devices and injury prevention will empower the old to do some activities. Setting up old care homes can reduce the social and psychological problems for the old and it can improve the productivity.
In a nutshell, eventhough growing old age group is an irritating problem for the society and the person we can't just ignore them. There is no clear cut guidance in reducing the old population but can improve the productivity and prevent impairment in a variety of means.
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- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 78
- ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF TECHNOLOGY 11
- The pie charts below describe average household expenditures by major categories in Japan and Malaysia in 2010. 56
- Nowadays many people believe that children should be taught history in schools, however, others argue that children should learn subjects that are more helpful for modern everyday life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Modern world Witnessed a hike in medical...
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...ll effects in this long life which will effect the person and society. We can see some...
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...ountry and the society. There should be provision for taking care of them, medications f...
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...e society. There should be provision for taking care of them, medications food sh...
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...tancy for people all over the world. One family with more dependent will be a bur...
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...oblem for the society and the person we cant just ignore them. There is no clear cut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, still, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84444444444 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68153263712 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7268818317 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.588235294 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64705882353 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251225387574 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787096640172 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417635246359 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147190284666 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029343596223 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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