Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are
difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Some places in our world, such as the Gobi desert or the Antarctic, where ambiances are challenging, attract extra travelers. This essay discusses the merits and drawbacks for this type of visitors by demonstrating points and showing examples.
On the one hand, there are some advantages for people traveling in places with hard climate conditions. These places have beautiful nature and primal circumstances, where visitors could get a unique experience about the world. Many animals can be seen in their natural habitat with their habits. The untouched nature could be observed in a primordial environment. Moreover, this adventure help people realize how much they do not know about life. To illustrate, many pictures were written with inspiration which was got by artists from such places.
On the other hand, there are also disadvantages of places with severe weather. First, the harsh climate can be unacceptable for decent numbers of visitors. Secondly, the temperature in such areas might be extremely hot or cold, so you need to pay attention to suitable clothes and boots. Thirdly, most contemporary conveniences are not available in such places, so you need to be aware of it in advance. Also in some regions, it is tough to provide any kind of emergency, for example, medical or security facilities are not possible. Lastly, there are many problems with communication like telephone, internet or tv signal so that you might need a satellite telephone for connection with the external world.
In conclusion, visiting hostile areas have many advantages for people who are looking for new experience, emotions, and charge of energy. But, there also many drawbacks you need to be very careful because in these areas no medical or emergency assistance.
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- IELTS 13 G T4 Essay 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2296819788 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84753916861 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1474216182 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159558240378 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517912391961 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532337500379 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100871380088 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318016646495 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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