In the future, experts predict that robots will be doing many of the tasks currently done by humans. Consequently, there will be advantages and disadvantages for society. In this essay, I will discuss both the positive and negative aspects of this new development.
On the one hand, utilizing technologies like robots can benefit people in different ways. First and foremost is about accuracy and efficiency. In other words, by having them on our workplaces the rate of errors that may happen by human will be decreased and can boost the accuracy that is more efficient. An example to illustrate this point is benefiting intelligent machines like robots for having some accounting works done because they need the most amount of attention. Secondly, there are some situations that probably endanger the healthiness of people. So, the using of different robots in order to tackle this issue, seems important. For instance, it is recommended to use them in some factories which are so polluted and are not a suitable place for humans. thirdly, as they do not require some expenses including, insurance and so forth so on, it is more economic in comparison to employing humans. That is why the use of robots is increasing rather than humans in society.
On the other hand, the downsides of using robots can not be neglected. The greatest weak point of that is related to reducing the rate of employment and leaving the huge amount of people unemployed. Since we are witnessing these days, robots are responsible for numerous duties which should have been done by human in order to hinder this crisis, I mean unemployment. A further common criticism that should be taken into account is about expenses. In case of having any kind of defective in machines, it expenses a lot to be repaired. As everybody knows, some fragments are so expensive and every company is not capable of purchasing a new one. Altogether means, robots are not free from problems.
In conclusion, as can be seen from the points made in this essay, there are both merits and demerits to having robots enter the workplace. If managed the important dark side of that, I mean unemployment, in the right way, I feel that overall advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 768, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thirdly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, i feel, i mean, in conclusion, kind of, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96276595745 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79052104378 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9588452088 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8571428571 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9047619048 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38095238095 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115712253232 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344793134162 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324388629733 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698327682545 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145343764438 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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