It is an obvious truth that the use of different medias such as, internet and television has been increasing and we are witnessing that common people can get popularity via them. Surly, it is associated with many advantages and disadvantages. This essay discuss both sides of views.
On the one hand, as we are seeing in Instagram and Youtube, people especially youth generation share everything about their private life in social networks in order to be famous or anything else without paying attention to it's negative sides. let us clarify it with an example, two month ago when one of my friends who is so popular in Instagram and has 10000 follower was going to go to a restaurant her house was rubbed by some rubbers who were aware of her absent. Secondly, it can bother you more than assisting sometimes. popular people are not able to carry on their rutin life any more, because of being under attention of others.
On the other hand, people who are in favour of medias and it's usages strongly believe, it can benefit many artist and singers who are not that much popular. Many singers can advertise their concerts and meetings via medias especially televisions and internet. In other words, it create a marvelous opportunity in related to their profession. So, making a lot of money and well knowing becomes possible. Also, their social situation can be boosted and they will get other's respects and attention. That is why people are in favour of these medias.
In conclusion, these days people are more in contact with variety of medias and there is possibility to become well known by them. Consequently, it lead to a lot of benefits and drawbacks and in my opinion, in case of using rightly, positive sides outweigh drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'discusses'.
Suggestion: discusses
...dvantages and disadvantages. This essay discuss both sides of views. On the one hand...
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Suggestion: Let
...paying attention to its negative sides. let us clarify it with an example, two mont...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... let us clarify it with an example, two month ago when one of my friends who is so po...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'follower' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'followers'.
Suggestion: followers
...s so popular in Instagram and has 10000 follower was going to go to a restaurant her hou...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Popular
...ther you more than assisting sometimes. popular people are not able to carry on their r...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun artist seems to be countable; consider using: 'many artists'.
Suggestion: many artists
...usages strongly believe, it can benefit many artist and singers who are not that much popul...
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Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...isions and internet. In other words, it create a marvelous opportunity in related to t...
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Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...me well known by them. Consequently, it lead to a lot of benefits and drawbacks and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84280936455 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61802209005 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595317725753 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7252464429 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152079114884 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455719448053 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414989910575 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938436313338 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208903119134 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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