Scientific research are carried and controlled by governments rather than private companies.Do you agree or disagreeGive an example from your knowledge

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Scientific research are carried and controlled by governments rather than private companies.
Do you agree or disagree
Give an example from your knowledge

Some argue, scientific research maintained by governments while, others argue that private companies should taking the initiative. However, I completely agree that private companies needs to take over the government, as it is more inclined due to its achievement in scientific and technological aspects.

Firstly, in this contemporary world scientists takes long timer than to achieve. Government, although provides equipment's to scientists laboratory facilities , goods and services they provide are of low cost which cannot be performed with. For instance, developing countries have the issue with the government, because it supplies the vital requirements in a low cost to save budget. Although their instance where government has taken scientific research way ahead but the drawbacks cannot be neglected.

On the other hand, scientists approach for private companies to get financial resources and which companies get recognition. Scientific experiments are need be held in proper manner, the best way is to give good infrastructure and facilities. To delineate an example, robotics in medical fields are developing due to private sectors especially in surgeries. The artificial intelligence and the technological up-gradation from generations conducted by private companies. The advancement in field of science like microprocessor and virtual glass are by artificial intelligence, this leading our future generation to be a better place.

In conclusion, Though there is difference in working condition of both sectors, than working in a different zones they can work together for betterment of future.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85169491525 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26613895263 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656779661017 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0682863947 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.083333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155884440383 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562227758903 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495669260065 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850096200907 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490734823812 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.65 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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