Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
It is true that today people have to face global warming, which is the biggest issue in recent decades. In my opinion, this problem is caused by the increasing number of cars and can be tackled by different measures.
Cars are the major problem causing global warming. Families have at least two cars, they prefer to use cars as the main transportation instead of public transport. The overuse of private transport caused the emission of CO2 into the atmosphere. Consequently, the ozone will be destroyed, the Earth's temperature will rise significantly. Moreover, the habitats of wild animals are demolished by cutting down a lot of trees to build more roads, factories, facilities. As a result, the extinction of various species leads to global warming. If this issue continues, the poles will be melted in the next 50 years.
Fortunately, there are several solutions that can be taken to address this problem. Firstly, governments should ban and reduce cars in the cities, public transport needs to be upgraded and extended to connect other regions. At the same time, authorities ought to encourage people to use public transport rather than cars. Individuals need to reduce the use of cars and other vehicle using fossil fuel by replacing them with friendly transportation like the bicycle. Furthermore, the construction of new conservation areas will protect wild animals and forest. By doing so, the CO2 level in the air will be declined considerably.
In conclusion, global warming is a serious problem that arises from human activities, which need the participation of both governments and individuals to be ended.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, at least, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20152091255 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94861465507 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0753610743 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16264553082 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535511723944 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646104801356 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128498416661 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737185127284 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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