You have lost an item of value on train.Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter•Describe the item•Explain where and when you left it•Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to recover my luggage which I lost recently while in transit.
The item was a green travel bag with a lot of travel stickers. The items inside the bag included my travel passport, foreign currency and air tickets additionally it also had a name tag attached on the side pocket on which my name and contact details were written. this bag was of great sentimental value as it always reminded me of the happy memories which I had while travelling overseas.
On Sunday evening I had boarded the Continental Express train at 8 pm from Beijing and I stored the bag in the overhead luggage storage box. I must have forgotten it inside the storage compartment when I reached Lhasa and it was only when I reached my hotel I realized it. For your information, I was in coach C and my seat number was 72.
Since I have come to Lhasa for vacation I feel I am in a perplexing situation as I am a foreigner so I would appreciate all your help to find this bag as there are some critical travel documents inside it. In case you manage to trace the travel bag, I am reachable on 8576879098. I will come and collect it from you.
I look forward to your immediate help.
Yours Sincerely
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... name and contact details were written. this bag was of great sentimental value as i...
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Line 8, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...exing situation as I am a foreigner so I would appreciate all your help to find t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46052631579 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59638379934 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3693710782 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.75 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132667936058 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522768800232 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291475194965 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659057790712 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257518415431 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.